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The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world, and also tell the use of water in three areas in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart and the table illustrates the two classified water in the world and their consumption in three various sectors in three different countries. it is manifest from information given that the saline water which constituted the major proportion by 97. 50% as compared to fresh water with just 2. 50% in world. The major area which have stored high percentage of fresh water at frozen water with 69. 80% and also fresh underground water accounted for 29. 90%, whereas the least proportions at underground ice and fresh renewable water by 0. 90% and 0. 30% respectively. On other hand, the usage of water in various sector that the Saudi Arabia have significant role in consumption of water in agriculture sector was reached the half percentage in comparison to Egypt and Canada with 40% and 30%. by contrast Canada have major usage in industrial sector with just over 40% as compared to Saudi Arabia and Egypt. Meanwhile the Scenario was quite different for domestic sector which have the least proportion in comparison with other two sectors, the domestic consumption nearly to 9% in Saudi Arabia which is less that Canada and Egypt.
The pie chart and the table illustrates the two classified
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in the world and their consumption in three various
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sectors
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that the saline
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which constituted the major proportion by 97. 50% as compared to
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fresh
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water
with
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2. 50% in world.

The major area which have stored high percentage of
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fresh
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water
at frozen
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with 69. 80% and
also
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fresh
underground
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accounted for 29. 90%, whereas the least proportions at underground ice and
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fresh
renewable
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by 0. 90% and 0. 30%
respectively
.

On other hand, the usage of
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water
in various
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sector
that the Saudi Arabia have significant role in consumption of
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water
in agriculture
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sector
was reached
the half percentage
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to Egypt and Canada with 40% and 30%.
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by
contrast Canada have major usage in industrial
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sector
with
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over 40% as compared to Saudi Arabia and Egypt.

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for domestic
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sector
which have the least proportion
in comparison
with other two
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, the domestic consumption
nearly
to 9% in Saudi Arabia which is less that Canada and Egypt.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world, and also tell the use of water in three areas in three countries.

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4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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