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The graph provides information about the contribution of three different zones of services such as agriculture, manufacturing and, business and financial to the United Kingdom over the period of a century.

The graph provides information about the contribution of three different zones of services such as agriculture, manufacturing and, business and financial to the United Kingdom over the period of a century. Overall, there are three important beneficial regions that had effects on United Kingdom’s economy in the nineteenth century, some of them had higher percentages in the first of century while the other one reached the highest percentage in the last years of the century. We can see from the date that manufacturing fell gradually during the century, while trend of business and financial sector was upward. As a regard, agriculture was almost 48 percent in the 1900 and there was a slight risen in 1950 but unfortunately, it dropped sharply to 10 percent in 1975and the percentage of agriculture zone in UK economy reached to the lowest number in 2000. In general, agriculture and manufacturing regions were in high percentage of United Kingdom’s economic in the first of the century and business and financial improved slightly in the twentieth century.

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