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The graph provides information about the contribution of three different zones of services such as agriculture, manufacturing and, business and financial to the United Kingdom over the period of a century.

The graph provides information about the contribution of three different zones of services such as agriculture, manufacturing and, business and financial to the United Kingdom over the period of a century. Overall, there are three important beneficial regions that had effects on United Kingdom’s economy in the nineteenth century, some of them had higher percentages in the first of century while the other one reached the highest percentage in the last years of the century. We can see from the date that manufacturing fell gradually during the century, while trend of business and financial sector was upward. As a regard, agriculture was almost 48 percent in the 1900 and there was a slight risen in 1950 but unfortunately, it dropped sharply to 10 percent in 1975and the percentage of agriculture zone in UK economy reached to the lowest number in 2000. In general, agriculture and manufacturing regions were in high percentage of United Kingdom’s economic in the first of the century and business and financial improved slightly in the twentieth century.
The graph provides information about the contribution of three
different
zones of services such as
agriculture
, manufacturing and, business and financial to the United Kingdom over the period of a century.

Overall
, there are three
important
beneficial regions that had effects on United Kingdom’s economy in the nineteenth century,
some
of them had higher
percentages
in the
first
of century while the other one reached the highest
percentage
in the last years of the century.

We can
see
from the date that manufacturing fell
gradually
during the century, while trend of business and financial sector was upward.

As a regard,
agriculture
was almost 48 percent in the 1900 and there was a slight risen in 1950
but
unfortunately, it dropped
sharply
to 10 percent in 1975and the
percentage
of
agriculture
zone in UK economy reached to the lowest number in 2000.

In general
,
agriculture
and manufacturing regions were in high
percentage
of United Kingdom’s economic in the
first
of the century and business and financial
improved
slightly
in the twentieth century.
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IELTS academic The graph provides information about the contribution of three different zones of services such as agriculture, manufacturing and, business and financial to the United Kingdom over the period of a century.

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