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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. RA5P
The diagram displays what Anthropology students did after complete their college degree and the table illustrates after five years later the anthropologist’s income. Overall, it is clear that most of the students did full-time work after complete their undergraduate degree course. However, after five years later most of the Anthropology graduates are getting higher earning. According to the graph, most of the undergraduate students of the Anthropology work as a full-time worker which is 52%. Whereas, part-time work and unemployed ration were same which were 15% and 12% respectively. Also, lowest proportion was 5%, those students was worked as a part-time worker as well as did postgrad study. Moreover, full-time postgrad study did 8% students and same proportion of students were not known. From the table, it is clear that after 5 years later most of the students, who work as a Freelancer consultant, Government sector and Private companies, doing high paid job which are 40%, 50% and 30% respectively what over $100, 000. In contrast, lowest number of students are doing low paid job which are 5% in Freelancer consultant, Government sector, and 10% in Private companies.
The diagram displays what Anthropology
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did after complete their college degree and the table illustrates after five years later the anthropologist’s income.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that most of the
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students
did full-time
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work
after complete their undergraduate degree course.
However
, after five years later most of the Anthropology graduates are getting higher earning.

According to the graph, most of the undergraduate
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students
of the Anthropology
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work
as a full-time worker which is 52%. Whereas, part-time
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work
and unemployed ration were same which were 15% and 12%
respectively
.
Also
,
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proportion was 5%, those
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was worked
as a part-time worker
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postgrad
study.
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, full-time
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study did 8%
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students
and same proportion of
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were not known.

From the table, it is
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clear
that after 5 years later most of the
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students
, who
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work
as a Freelancer consultant,
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Government
sector and Private
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companies
, doing high paid job which are 40%, 50% and 30%
respectively
what over $100, 000.
In contrast
,
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lowest
number of
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students
are doing low paid job which are 5% in Freelancer consultant,
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Government
sector, and 10% in Private
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companies
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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