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The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 1Mk7
The bar chart illustrates the information about the international sales of four different platforms of digital games (mobile phone games, online, console and handheld games) from 2000 to 2006. Units are measured in billions of dollars. Overall, sales of mobile phones, online and handheld games rose annually, while there was a gradual decrease in the sale of console games. In 2000, the figure for console games stood at nearly $6 billion, while there was a significant increase to around $11 billion in the market of handheld game devices. Sales of mobile and online games were not presented in that year. In 2003, having reached around 16 billions of dollars, handheld games were the most popular in the international markets, while there was a slight decrease by $2 billion in the figure for the console. With respect to mobile phones and online games, they started to be sold with around 3 and 2 respectively. In 2006, sales of handheld games rose to 17 billions of dollars which were the highest point in that year, while the figures for online and mobile phone reached to 9 and 7 billion dollars respectively. In contrast, regarding the console games, it dropped to its lowest point, at around $2. 5 billion.
The bar chart illustrates the information about the international
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sales
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different
platforms of digital
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games
(mobile
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phone
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games
,
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online
,
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console
and handheld
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games)
from 2000 to 2006. Units
are measured
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billions
of dollars.

Overall
,
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sales
of mobile
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phones
,
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online
and handheld
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games
rose
annually
, while there was a gradual decrease in the
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sale
of
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console
games.

In 2000, the figure for
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console
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games
stood at
nearly
$6
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billion
, while there was a significant increase to
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around
$11
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billion
in the market of handheld game devices.
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Sales
of mobile and
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online
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games
were not presented in that year. In 2003, having reached
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around
16
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billions
of dollars, handheld
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games
were the most popular in the international markets, while there was a slight decrease by $2
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billion
in the figure for the
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console
. With respect to mobile
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online
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games
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started
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around
3 and 2
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In 2006,
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of handheld
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rose to 17
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billions
of dollars which were the highest point in that year, while the figures for
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online
and mobile
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phone
reached to 9 and 7
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billion
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respectively
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In contrast
, regarding the
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console
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games
, it dropped to its lowest point, at
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around
$2. 5
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billion
.
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