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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. B5g5
The chart gives information about the percentage of the total world population in 4 various countries ( India, China, USA and Japan ) in year 1950 and 2002, and 2050 projections. Units are measure in numbers. Overall, In 1950 and 2002 the highest population in the universe is China and japan was too low compare to others countries. Coming to 2050 India has high projections and japan was too less consider to others. Firstly, China has the huge population in the planet in both years 1950 and 2002 with (20 and above) in the 2050 it will be 15%. Secondly, India has placed second in the world in 1950 it has 15% of population and rose to above under 20% in 2002. In 2050 it has around 20 % of projection is there. In USA, the population of three years have similar amount of percentage will be noted that is above 5% in 1950 and in the line of 5% in both years 2002 and 2050. Finally, japan has poorest population with below 5% in three years.
The chart gives information about the percentage of the total world
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population
in 4 various countries
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India, China, USA and
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Japan
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)
in
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year
1950 and 2002, and 2050 projections. Units are measure in numbers.

Overall
, In 1950 and 2002 the highest
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population
in the universe is China and
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japan
was too low compare to others countries. Coming to 2050 India has high projections and
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japan
was too less consider to others.

Firstly
, China has the huge
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population
in the planet in both years 1950 and 2002 with (20 and above) in the 2050 it will be 15%.
Secondly
, India has placed second in the world in 1950 it has 15% of
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population
and rose to above under 20% in 2002. In
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2050 it
has around 20 % of projection is there.

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In USA
, the
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population
of three years have similar amount of percentage will
be noted
that is
above 5% in 1950 and in the line of 5% in both years 2002 and 2050.
Finally
,
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japan
has
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poorest
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population
with below 5% in three years.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

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6.5
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