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The table shows the overall sales made by a cafeteria in an office building on a normal weekday.

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The table shows the overall sales made by a cafeteria in an office building on a normal weekday. The sales of all 4 menus wildly fluctuated during the day. For the sale of coffee, the sale peaked in the morning at the amount of 265 sales, then it steadily dropped to 185 and145 sales in the afternoon. In the evening time, the sale rose again to 200. Likewise, the sale of tea followed the same pattern as coffee’s sale that the highest sale was in the morning at 110 sales, then decreased significantly in the afternoon to 50 and 35, respectively. Then, it increased to 80 sales at the period of 5. 30-8. 30. In contrast, the sale of pastries was remarkably high during the morning and afternoon time, at 275 sales and 150 sales, consecutively. Meanwhile, in the evening, the sales dropped notably to 80 sales. For the sales of sandwiches, the sale in the morning was quite low, at 50 sales. However, the sale rose significantly to 200 sales during 10. 30 to 2. 30, then dropped sharply to 40 sales during 2. 30 to 5. 30, and increased again to 110 sales in the evening.
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made by a cafeteria in an office building on a normal weekday. The
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of all 4 menus
wildly
fluctuated during the day.

For the
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sale
of coffee, the
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peaked in the
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morning
at the amount of 265
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, then it
steadily
dropped to 185 and145
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sales
in the afternoon. In the evening time, the
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sale
rose again to 200.
Likewise
, the
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sale
of tea followed the same pattern as coffee’s
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sale
that the highest
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sale
was in the
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morning
at 110
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sales
, then decreased
significantly
in the afternoon to 50 and 35,
respectively
. Then, it increased to 80
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sales
at the period of 5. 30-8. 30.

In contrast
, the
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sale
of pastries was
remarkably
high during the
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morning
and afternoon time, at 275
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sales
and 150
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sales
,
consecutively
. Meanwhile, in the evening, the
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sales
dropped
notably
to 80
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. For the
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of sandwiches, the
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sale
in the
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morning
was quite low, at 50
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sales
.
However
, the
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rose
significantly
to 200
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during 10. 30 to 2. 30, then dropped
sharply
to 40
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during 2.
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30
to 5.
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30
, and increased again to 110
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in the evening.
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IELTS academic The table shows the overall sales made by a cafeteria in an office building on a normal weekday.

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