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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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The given bar chart describes the percentage of Gross domestic product from IT industry and service industry of the UK between 1992 and 2000. From the overall analysis, it is clear that the GDP from IT industry has increased over the given time period, whereas the percentage of GDP from service industry was gradually inclined. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the Service industry accounted for 4% of GDP, while IT wad at just over 6%. Over the next four years, both components stood at similar level between 6% and 8%. Moving further, the proportion of GDP was a significant increase for IT industry from 12% to 17% in the year 1998 and 2000. However, the second component of GDP was a steady climb by merely 1% during the last two years.
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describes
the percentage of Gross domestic product from IT
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industry
and service
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industry
of the UK between 1992 and 2000. From the
overall
analysis, it is
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clear
that the GDP from IT
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industry
has increased over the
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given
time period, whereas the percentage of GDP from service
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industry
was
gradually
inclined. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the Service
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industry
accounted for 4% of GDP, while IT wad at
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just
over 6%. Over the
next
four years, both components stood at similar level between 6% and 8%. Moving
further
, the proportion of GDP was a significant increase for IT
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industry
from 12% to 17% in the year 1998 and 2000.
However
, the second component of GDP was a steady climb by
merely
1% during the last two years.
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