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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

The provided pie graph illustrates the work availability’s proportion of graduates from anthropology department in the university after the graduation, while the provided table discussed anthropologists ‘s salaries in freelance consultant, government sector and private companies works after five years. Overall, after the analysis of the given chart, it can be witnessed the percentage of the anthropologists graduates in full time work to half of the total of graduates, while after five years the half of the graduates, who will be paid the highest salaries in government sector. After graduation, only 5 % of the graduates was work in part time and postgrads study. In similar terms, the full time postgrad study and not known destination was recorded a particular plummet to 8 %. After five years from graduation, the anthropology employers who will paid over 25. 000 will recorded a surge in private companies to 10 %, whereas the anthropology employers who will paid over 75. 000 will witnessed to 40 % in freelancer consultant.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

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