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The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.

The line graph compares the patterns of employment in the USA from 1930 to 2010. It is measured in numbers. Overall, it is clear that all the figures increased over time except farming, fishing and foresting, which was the highest at the start of the period, but it witnessed a decline over the period. In 1930, agriculture stood at around 70%, while sales and other services started at about 10%; however, technical and industrial employment was too low. In terms of agriculture, it decreased noticeably, and after increased rapidly industry figures surpassed all other figures. At the end of the period, the industrial quantity was the greatest and reached at just below 40, followed by technical which was approximately 30, sales and office were close to 20, and other services was near to 10. Agriculture reached at the lowest at the end at just only around 5.

The line graph compares the patterns of employment in the USA from 1930 to 2010. It is measured
 in numbers.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that all the figures increased over time except farming, fishing and foresting, which was the highest at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 of the period, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it witnessed a decline over the period.

In 1930, agriculture stood at around 70%, while sales and other services This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at about 10%; however
, technical and industrial employment was too low. In terms of agriculture, it decreased noticeably
, and after increased rapidly
 industry figures surpassed all other figures.

At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period, the industrial quantity was the greatest and reached at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below 40, followed by technical which was approximately 30, sales and office were close to 20, and other services was near to 10. Agriculture reached at the lowest at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 around 5. 