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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. AX8L
The pie chart illustrates the target of Anthropology graduates from one university did after completing their undergraduate study. The table represents the earning of them in their work after 5 years. Overall, majority of students started to work full-time and all-most of them had good source of income. With regard to full time work, it accounted for 58 per cent, and for part time was 15%. However, 12%. of Learners were unemployed and 8% were not Known. Moverover, 5% and 8% were involve in post-time work and postgrad study and Full-time postgrad study respectively. From the details, it shows that 50% of graduates who work on government sector earn the salary of more than a million whereas 40% and 30% who involve in freelance consultants and private companies made the same amount. In contrast, only 5% each make $25, 000to $49. 999 in freelance consultants and government sector but 10% earn $25. 000 to 49. 999 in private companies.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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6.0
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