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the chart below shows what anthropology graduates from oine university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates what the graduates of Anthropology from a certain university were doing after finishing their undergraduate course. Also, the table provides information of the salaries of these anthropology graduates after five years of work. Overall, it can be easily seen that above the half of the graduates of this profession have jobs in a full-time work. The other half is distributed in part-time workers, part-time workers that are also postgraduate students, full-time postgraduate students, the unemployed and also a sector of not known. Furthermore, from the table we can see that the ones who receive major salaries are working on the government sector and in freelance consultants. On the contrary, the ones with the lowest wealth are working in private companies. Firstly, as it was mentioned, the 52% of the anthropology graduates are working in a full-time job, and slightly less than a quarter of the total graduates are in a part-time work and unemployed (15% and 12% respectively). The rest of the graduates are in a full-time postgraduate study and in a part-time job while also studying a postgraduate course (8% and 5% respectively). An 8% of the graduates have no record of their activities. Secondly, after 5 years of work, graduates working in the government sector show one of the lowest percentages (5%) for the diminished salary, and the highest percentage (50%) on the biggest salary. For freelance consultants the overview is similar, but with only 40% in the highest salary. On contrary, in private companies the lowest salary is increased, and the highest salary presents a descent (30%) in comparison to the 2 other types of employment just mentioned.
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of Anthropology from a certain university were doing after finishing their undergraduate course.
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of these anthropology
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after five years of work.

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of this profession have jobs in a full-time work. The other half
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students, full-time
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government
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are
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working
in a full-time job, and
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are in a part-time work and unemployed (15% and 12%
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are in a full-time
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study and in a part-time job while
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studying a
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course (8% and 5%
respectively
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have no record of their activities.

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one of the lowest percentages (5%) for the diminished
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, and the highest percentage (50%) on the biggest
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. For freelance consultants the overview is similar,
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the lowest
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is increased
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presents a descent (30%)
in comparison
to the 2 other types of employment
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IELTS academic the chart below shows what anthropology graduates from oine university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years.

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