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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of money lavishing in houses for various areas (housing, food, health care, education, transportation and other) in a single country in 1950 and 2010. It is crystal clear that, in 1950 people spent a notable money for housing and on the other hand by 2010 food was the most common area that people looked in to. In 1950, it can be seen that 72. 1% of money spent on housing and it was the famous category in this year. However, people consumed only 2. 4% for the healthcare and by the way there were slight contrasts (1. 1%) between transportation and other areas at around 3. 3% and 4. 4% of expenditures, respectively. Interestingly, it is apparent that education sector had 6. 6% of expenditures and food category merely had only 11. 2% of expenditures. By 2010, food category witnessed an upward trend (34. 0%) nonetheless, there was dramatical decrease on housing sector (22. 0%) as well. It is clear that education and healthcare had the same amount of expenses. On the contrary, transportation rose up to 14. 0% and other sectors increased gradually up to 19. 2%.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of money lavishing in
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for various areas (housing,
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, health care, education, transportation and
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in a single country in 1950 and 2010.

It is crystal
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that, in 1950
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people
spent a notable money for housing and on the
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other
hand by 2010
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food
was the most common area that
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people
looked in to.

In 1950, it can be
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seen
that 72. 1% of money spent on housing and it was the
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famous
category in this year.
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,
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people
consumed
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2. 4% for the healthcare and by the way there were slight contrasts (1. 1%) between transportation and
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areas at around 3. 3% and 4. 4% of expenditures,
respectively
.
Interestingly
, it is apparent that education sector had 6. 6% of expenditures and
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food
category
merely
had
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only
11. 2% of expenditures.

By 2010,
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category witnessed an upward trend (34. 0%) nonetheless, there was dramatical decrease on housing sector (22. 0%)
as well
. It is
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clear
that education and healthcare had the same amount of expenses.
On the contrary
, transportation rose up to 14. 0% and
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sectors increased
gradually
up to 19. 2%.

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