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The chart below shows the values of some of Australia’s trading inks in 2012, 2013 and 2014.

The chart below shows the values of some of Australia’s trading inks in 2012, 2013 and 2014. 30YeJ

The given chart illustrates how much money is spent in several of Australia’s trading links in three different years, such as 2012, 2013 and 2014. The trading involved five trading partners, namely China, Japan, Korea, Thailand, and Vietnam, and it is counted in Australian millions of dollars. Overall, the values of the trading remained steady during the three different years for most of the trading partners except China. China spent the highest amount of money trading with Australia, which reached about AUS$ 120. 000 in 2012 and significantly increased to approximately AUS $150. 000 in 2012 and then became stable to the following year. On the other hand, Vietnam was the lowest with only around AUS 10. 000 is spent in 2013. However, it still had a consistent improvement from around AUS $ 6. 000, to AUS $ 7. 000, in the following year and then became around AUS $ 10. 000 in 2013. Meanwhile, Japan, Korea, and Thailand remained stable in trading value during 2012 - 2013, around AUS $ 70. 000, AUS $35. 000, and AUS $20. 000, respectively.

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