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Presentation appropriate design pattern for creation residential complex compatible with hot and dry climate, with the approach of optimizing energy consumption(case study: city LarestanFars)

Presentation appropriate design pattern for creation residential complex compatible with hot and dry climate, with the approach of optimizing energy consumption(case study: city LarestanFars) 2Klnw
Today, Excessive consumption of fossil fuels is one of the most important challenges in the world. Other factors such as environmental and climate change is only part of the environmental damages. energy consumption in buildings and specially in residential complex does not only consist of heating and cooling but also all processes of production and operation. The residential complex is the most important part of building a major share of buildings on the neighborhood and the city. The highest energy consumption have compared to the other buildings in the city. Due to the energy crisis and environmental conditions of the 20th century, as well as reducing fossil fuel reserves in the world, it (saving) is more representative. So move towards sustainable construction and creating a healthy environment in terms of resource efficiency and ecological principles can be a solution for this case; This study tries to evaluate the effect of passive study (architectural harmony with the climate) as one of the most effective ways to reduce energy consumption in residential complexes, How to design residential buildings in hot and dry climates described in LARESTAN and To achieve an the appropriate model for the design and construction of residential complexes aimed at saving energy consumption, step. In this paper, after reviewing the architectural design of passive methods, as Lar climate of the region has been investigated. The following hypotheses achieve the most optimal design and architectural design of residential complexes in this region, simulation software with Design Builder (Design Builder 4. 5. 0. 178) and motor Energy Plus (Energy Plus 8. 3) was performed. Our simulation results show that it can be disabled using solutions building including double glass, external wall insulation, ceiling upside down, and. . . on building energy consumption in hot and dry climates LARESTAN, reducing created. Then, the most effective parameter in the design of the ceiling upside down in the area selected and simulated again with details of the standard, the most optimal mode is selected. After applying the optimized passive solutions and also the most optimal inverted roofs in residential complex designed to simulate the entire complex was done, the results show that on average can be as much as 12. 51 percent on energy consumption this type of residential complexes in the climate of LARESTAN save. The obtained model can also be used in similar climates.
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climate
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environmental damages.
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consumption
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and operation. The
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residential
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complex
is the most
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important
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building
a major

share of
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buildings
on the neighborhood and the city. The highest
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energy
consumption

have compared to the other
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buildings
in the city. Due to the
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energy
crisis and

environmental conditions of the 20th century,
as well
as reducing fossil fuel reserves in

the world, it (saving) is more representative.
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So
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move
towards sustainable construction

and creating a healthy environment in terms of resource efficiency and ecological

principles can be a solution for this case; This study tries to evaluate the effect of

passive study (architectural harmony with the
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climate)
as one of the most effective ways

to
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energy
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consumption
in
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residential
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complexes
, How to
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design
residential

buildings in hot and dry
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climates
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described
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residential
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complexes
aimed at

saving
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energy
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consumption
, step. In this paper, after reviewing the architectural design

of passive methods, as
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climate
of the region has
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hypotheses achieve the most optimal
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design
and architectural
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design
of residential

complexes in this region, simulation software with
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Design
Builder
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Builder

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(Energy
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was performed
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results
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building
including double glass,

external wall insulation, ceiling upside down, and.
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on
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hot and dry
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in the
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design
of the ceiling upside down in the area selected and simulated again with

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details
of the standard, the most optimal mode
is selected
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passive solutions and
also
the most optimal inverted roofs in
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residential
complex

designed to simulate the entire
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was done
, the results
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that on average can

be as much as 12. 51 percent on
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save. The obtained model can
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IELTS academic Presentation appropriate design pattern for creation residential complex compatible with hot and dry climate, with the approach of optimizing energy consumption(case study: city LarestanFars)

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