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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. PKaJ
The given pictorial illustrations depict a nation's earnings from exports in different categories in 2015 and 2016 whereas the table describes the percentage change of these products in the same periods. The first product petroleum went from 61 billion dollars in 2015 to 63 $billion in 2016 with 3 percent increase. The second category, engineered products benefits by 8. 5% which rises from 58 $billion to 62 $billion. However, in all the categories, Gems & jewellery faced a drop if 5. 18% from 43 $billion to 41 $billion. Apart from these, farming goods has negligible improvement from 31 billion dollars to 31. 5 billion dollars with 0. 81% change and garment exports have grown by 15. 24% from 28 $billion to 31 $billion. The highest earning can be seen in textile exports and engineered goods from all the categories. To recapitulate, cloth category is the major sector of exports in all the other products.
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petroleum went from 61
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dollars in 2015 to 63
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in 2016 with 3 percent increase.
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The
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, engineered
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benefits by 8. 5% which rises from 58
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to 62
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, in all the
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, Gems &
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jewellery
faced a drop if 5. 18% from 43
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to 41
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. Apart from these, farming
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has negligible improvement from 31
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dollars to 31. 5
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dollars with 0. 81%
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and garment
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have grown by 15. 24% from 28
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in textile
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and engineered
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goods
from all the categories.

To recapitulate, cloth
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is the major sector of
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in all the other
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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