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the map below shows the present and proposed facilities of a universities and the pie charts compare the percentage of engineering and medical students.

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The map illustrate about the present and propose facilities of a university and bar chart compare the percentage of medical as well as engineering students. There are two phase, where the present facilities are upcoming facilities 2025. The map from pictures of map, nowadays only three existing facilities are there as in a upcoming future 2025 facilities going to change significantly. In the layout of metric college provides only two facilities which are only e dedicated to education medical building and technical building. this is only the external layout of building as regarding to service restaurant is only available. In addition our proposed facilities are surrounded by restaurant like half of residence and sports complex. where is, in future 2025 upcoming facilities is surrounded by North side of medical building our library and the east side of technical building our faculty office while between them of North East side lecture hall can we construct. overall, nowadays population of the medical students is three quarter 75% compare to engineering students is a quarter, medical students population is 3 times more than engineering students. Whereas, the number of students in 2025 is gradually increases up to 45%. But compared to that medical learner's are still higher in 2025.
The map illustrate about the present and propose facilities of a university and bar chart compare the percentage of
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three existing facilities are there as in
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e dedicated to education
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medical
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and technical
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the external layout of
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addition
our proposed facilities
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where
is, in future 2025 upcoming facilities
is surrounded
by North side of
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medical
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our library and the east side of technical
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our faculty office while between them of North East side lecture hall can we construct.
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overall
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