Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. BJMNm
The given chart depicts the export earnings of one country in various categories from 2015 to 2016 and the table illustrates the change in the proportion of exports in each category in the year 2016 when compared to 2015. Overall, it is evident that all categories have increased except the Gems and Jewellery. Firstly, the top two exports, Petroleum Products and Engineered goods had similar sales volumes. Petroleum products increased slightly by 3% from 60 billion dollars in 2015 to about 62 billion dollars in 2016. While Engineering goods increased by 8. 5% from roughly 58 Billion dollars in 2015 to approximately 61 billion dollars in 2016. On the other hand, Gems and Jewellery sales had a decline of 5. 18% over this period i. e. , about 42 billion dollars in 2015 to approximately 41 billion dollars in 2016. Agricultural products were 30 billion dollars in the year 2015 and is increased by 0. 81% in the year 2016. In the meantime, a major increase of 15. 24% is observed in textiles i. e, approximately 25 billion dollars in 2015 to merely about 30 billion dollars in 2016.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
chart depicts the export earnings of one country in various categories from 2015 to 2016 and the table illustrates the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the proportion of exports in each category in the year 2016 when compared to 2015.

Overall
, it is evident that all categories have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
except the Gems and
Possible spelling mistake. 'Jewellery' is British English.
Jewellery
.

Firstly
, the top two exports, Petroleum Products and Engineered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
had similar sales volumes. Petroleum products
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
slightly
by 3% from 60
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2015 to about 62
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2016.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
Engineering
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 8. 5% from roughly 58
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2015 to approximately 61
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2016.

On the other hand
, Gems and
Possible spelling mistake. 'Jewellery' is British English.
Jewellery
sales had a decline of 5. 18% over this period
There should be no space here: "i.e.".
i. e.
Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
,
about 42
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2015 to approximately 41
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2016. Agricultural products were 30
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in the year 2015 and is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 0. 81% in the year 2016. In the meantime, a major increase of 15. 24%
is observed
in textiles i. e, approximately 25
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2015 to
merely
about 30
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dollars
in 2016.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting