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The pie chart illustrate the proportion of water utilize for various motivation in industrial use, agricultural use, domestic use six region of the earth.

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The pie chart illustrate the proportion of water utilize for various motivation in industrial use, agricultural use, domestic use six region of the earth. Overall, it can be seen that higher motivation of make use of water in agricultural both in Africa 84% central Asia 88% and South East Asia then compare other tree areas. if we compare just this tree area then without any doubt we say that it is central Asia used of water in agricultural. Industrial utilization of water lot of used in North America. Europe utilize water in industrial uses 5% increase. the lowest uses make of water in society of central Asia 5% only. in domes use continuity of water 15% in Europe, South America slightly increase 5% in south America. Central Asia and South East Asia both are same used of water 7% in domestic uses. It is clear that utilization of water is higher in six area of the earth in agricultural use then domestic use and industrial use.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrate the proportion of water utilize for various motivation in industrial use, agricultural use, domestic use six region of the earth.

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