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the bar chart shows the highest qualification attained attained by sex for the working age population in Wales in 2001/2002

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The bar chart provides information about working-age population and qualifications in Wales in 2001/2002. Proportions are represented by percentage. The box at the top left side represents sex. We can make comparison by sex, qualifications and percentage. Overall, if we look at the provided chart, it is clear that males dominate in GCE A level or equivalent criteria, which makes up just under 30%, in comparison with women, which is just over 10%. However, GCSE grade A-C or equivalent demonstrated a reversed pattern, with women accounting for over 30% and men, which constitute just under 20%. Secondly, higher education qualifications became the lowest qualifications attained for both genders, accounting for almost 10%. Finally, to note that four criterion (degree or equivalent, higher education qualification, other qualifications, no qualifications) have a similar percentage ratio between men and women. In conclusion the provided table chart, GCE A level or equivalent and GCSE grade A-C or equivalent criterion became the highest attained qualifications for males and females respectively. Furthermore, other four qualifications share a similar accomplishment ratio between two sexes.

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 the provided table chart, Possible spelling mistake found.IceAceGCBGCCGTEDCE
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 and GCSE grade A-C or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withidenticalcomparablecorrespondingequalproportionatetantamount
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