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The chart below shows the sales of cookies at Mary’s Bake Shop from 2001 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the sales of cookies at Mary’s Bake Shop from 2001 to 2003. 7jJ3

The bar chart illustrates the sales for three kinds of Mary’s cookies (chocolate chip, oatmeal and butter) from 2001 to 2003 in the thousands of dollars. In 2001, chocolate chip cookie sales were the most at approximately $125, 000 followed by oatmeal sales at close to $75, 000. However, in 2002 oatmeal cookie sales dramatically increased and surpassed chocolate chip to become the top seller at about $245, 000 whereas chocolate chip cookies sold at around $200, 000. In 2003, both chocolate chip and oatmeal increased sales significantly by around $50, 000 to end at approximately $250, 000 and $300, 000, respectively. On the other hand, butter cookie sales were low in comparison to the other two starting at just above $50, 000 and decreasing steadily to near $40, 000 in 2003. Overall, between 2001 and 2003 the sales of chocolate chip and oatmeal cookies rose dramatically while the sales of butter cookies were significantly less than chocolate chip and oatmeal and decreased slightly.

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oatmeal
 and butter) from 2001 to 2003 in the thousands of dollars.

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oatmeal
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 at close to $75, 000. However
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oatmeal
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cookie
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dramatically
 increased and surpassed chocolate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslicewafer
chip
 to become the top seller at about $245, 000 whereas chocolate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslicewafer
chip
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cookies
 sold at around $200, 000. In 2003, both chocolate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslicewafer
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oatmeal
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 at approximately $250, 000 and $300, 000, respectively
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On the other hand
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 above $50, 000 and decreasing steadily
 to near $40, 000 in 2003.

Overall
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 of chocolate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslicewafer
chip
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oatmeal
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cookies
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 while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
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 of butter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwaferbiscuit
cookies
 were significantly
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 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withporridgecereal
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 and decreased slightly
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