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The chart below shows the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared

The chart below shows the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared 7b5n

The outcome of an adult survey are shown in charts illustrated above. The reason why grown-ups want to study is shown in the bar chart while the pie chart determines how people think the cost needs to be shared. According to the bar chart, 40% of the adults want to study since they are interested in the course. It can be seen that 38% of the respondents are interested in gaining a qualification. Exactly 22% of the surveyees decided to study as it will be useful for their career. About 40% of the adults decided to study because they enjoy learning and also because it wil increase their chances for a promotion. Only 9% of the participants responded 'to meet people', making it the most unpopular reason among the seven mentioned. Furthermore, 40% of the people believe that individuals should be baring their own costs. While around 35% of the people expect their employers to help with the education expenses. On the other hand, only 25% of individuals agree that the taxpayers should be contributing for adult education

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