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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. ddB7
The chart illustrates the percentage of people consuming coffee, tea and other beverages in 5 cities in Australia(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart). Overall, it is clearly seen that most people that bought fresh coffee are in the two most populated cities in Australia, Sydney and Melbourne, whereas those who acquired instant coffee last month are in Hobart and Brisbane. Compared to Melbourne, in Sydney, the percentage of people that bought fresh coffee in 4 weeks are higher by approximately 2%. However, instant coffee seems to be popular in Melbourne than in Sydney as well as going to a cafe for a cup of tea or coffee. Regarding Brisbane and Adelaide, the number of people who bought fresh coffee is almost similar in the two cities, even if the difference is lower than 1%. The chart shows that in the last 3 cities, statistics of instant coffee which was sold at between 50% and 55%. Also, between the three of them, visiting a cafe for coffee and tea in Hobart is the most widespread.
The chart illustrates the percentage of
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, tea and other beverages in 5
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in Australia(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart).

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that
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are in the two most populated
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in Australia, Sydney and Melbourne, whereas those who acquired instant
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last month are in Hobart and Brisbane.

Compared to Melbourne, in Sydney, the percentage of
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in 4 weeks are higher by approximately 2%.
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seems to be popular in
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Melbourne
than in Sydney
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cafe
for a cup of tea or coffee.

Regarding Brisbane and Adelaide, the number of
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is almost similar in the two
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, even if the difference is lower than 1%. The chart
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that in the last 3
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, statistics of instant
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which
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at between 50% and 55%.
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, between the three of them, visiting a
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for
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and tea in Hobart is the most widespread.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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