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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. bdyl
The chart demonstrates the questionnare results that how often people buy coffee and tea in five various Australian cities (Sdney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart). Overall, all residents from five different cities except Adelaide are leader in the category that went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks. The people who bought fresh coffee in the same period has the least percentage among the all cities. People from Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart are accounted most for the category went to café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks slight above 60, almost 64, slight above 55 and approximately 63 percent respectively. In contrast Adelaide residents made up leader category that bought instant coffee in the same period with almost 50 percent. The consumers who bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks has the least rates among the five various cities.
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and tea in five various Australian cities (
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, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart).

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in the same period has the least percentage among the all cities.

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from Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart
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or tea in last 4 weeks slight above 60, almost 64, slight above 55 and approximately 63 percent
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Adelaide residents made up leader category that
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in the same period with almost 50 percent.

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in last 4 weeks has the least rates among the five various cities.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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