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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. AVG1
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people’s buying and drinking coffee and tea in five different Australian cities. Overall, more than half the population in all cities except Adelaide went to a café for coffee or tea in last four weeks. While buying instant coffee also popular and buying fresh coffee generally less common. To begin with, people going to cafés was most popular in Melbourne and Hobart at 64% and 63% respectively. Sydney was comparably high at just over 60% followed by Brisbane around 56%, and finally Adelaide at under 50%. In Hobart, instant coffee purchase stood at 54%, ahead of Brisbane and Adelaide at 52% and 50% respectively, Melbourne at 48% and lastly Sydney just over 45%. Further analyzing the graph, the stocking up on fresh coffee was below 45% for all cities. It was most common in Sydney (44%) and Melbourne (42%). Hobart was next at 39%, lastly Adelaide and Brisbane were much lower and nearly level at around 34%.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
people
’s buying and drinking
coffee
and tea in five
different
Australian cities.

Overall
, more than half the population in all cities except Adelaide went to a café for
coffee
or tea in last four weeks. While buying instant
coffee
also
popular and buying fresh
coffee
generally
less common.

To
begin
with,
people
going to cafés was most popular in Melbourne and Hobart at 64% and 63%
respectively
. Sydney was
comparably
high at
just
over 60% followed by Brisbane around 56%, and
finally
Adelaide at under 50%. In Hobart, instant
coffee
purchase
stood at 54%, ahead of Brisbane and Adelaide at 52% and 50%
respectively
, Melbourne at 48% and
lastly
Sydney
just
over 45%.

Further
analyzing the graph, the stocking up on fresh
coffee
was below 45% for all cities. It was most common in Sydney (44%) and Melbourne (42%). Hobart was
next
at 39%,
lastly
Adelaide and Brisbane were much lower and
nearly
level at around 34%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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164 words
6.5
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