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the chart below shows the result of a survey about people

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The bar chart compares the variation in survey about tea as well as coffee purchasing and drinking habit of many people in Five Australian cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. On the one hand, it is observed that in Sydney over 60 % of people tend to go cafe for tea or coffee, while only 44% of these humankind purchased fresh coffee in last four weeks. In addition, with regard to Melbourne about 66% of humans choose to go cafe for tea of coffee, while only 40% and 45% of people purchased fresh coffee as well as ready to make coffee respectively. Moreover, with respect to Brisbane about 36% of people bought instant coffee which is the lowest figure of all cities. Furthermore, about 50% and 55% of people in Brisbane, bought ready to make tea and went to the cafe. On the other hand, about 35% of Adelaide people choose to purchase fresh coffee rather then went cafe. In addition, about 50% of people bought instant coffee as well as 50% of people went to cafe for tea. With regard to Hobart, about 65% of people wnt to cafe for coffee while only 40% of people bought fresh coffee. Furthermore, about 55% of menkind in these continent purchased ready to make coffee. Overall, in Australia most of the people went to cafe for coffee or tea while only fewer people purchased fresh coffee. In addition, some people in all Australian cities who bought ready to make coffee.
The bar chart compares the variation in survey about
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purchasing and drinking habit of
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people
in Five Australian cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

On the one hand, it
is observed
that in Sydney over 60 % of
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people
tend to go
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cafe
for
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or
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coffee
, while
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only
44% of
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these humankind
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purchased
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fresh
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coffee
in last four weeks.
In addition
, with regard to Melbourne about 66% of humans choose to go
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cafe
for
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tea
of
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coffee
, while
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only
40% and 45% of
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people
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purchased
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fresh
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coffee
as well
as
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ready
to
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make
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coffee
respectively
.
Moreover
, with respect to Brisbane about 36% of
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people
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instant
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which is the lowest figure of all cities.
Furthermore
, about 50% and 55% of
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people
in Brisbane,
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bought
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ready
to
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make
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tea
and
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went
to the
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cafe
.

On the other hand
, about 35% of Adelaide
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people
choose to
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purchase
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fresh
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coffee
rather
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then
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went
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cafe
.
In addition
, about 50% of
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people
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bought
instant
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coffee
as well
as 50% of
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people
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went
to
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cafe
for
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tea
. With regard to Hobart, about 65% of
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people
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to
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for
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coffee
while
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only
40% of
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people
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Furthermore
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menkind
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purchased
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ready
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make
coffee.

Overall
, in Australia most of the
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people
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went
to
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cafe
for
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coffee
or
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tea
while
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only
fewer
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people
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purchased
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fresh
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coffee
.
In addition
,
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some
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people
in all Australian cities who
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bought
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ready
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make
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coffee
.
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the result of a survey about people

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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