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The chart below shows the reslut of survey about peoples cofee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.

The chart below shows the reslut of survey about peoples cofee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities. 9Llgn

The illustrated bar graph below depicts the survey about buying a fresh coffee, instant coffee or went to a café in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart in the last 4 weeks. Overall, as we can in the graph, majority of the people who are living in five different cities of Australia shows that they went to a café for coffee or tea in the last 4 weeks, however, only a small number of people in particular, Brisbane and Adelaide chose to bought a fresh coffee. To begin with, just over 60% of residents who are residing in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart choose to visit café and stay for their coffee and tea as well as half of the population in Brisbane (55%) and Adelaide (50%) also decides to take their coffee and tea inside the café. Moreover, merely 35% of residents in Brisbane and Adelaide decide to buy a fresh coffee in the last month compared to other approximately half of the population who decide to purchase an instant coffee instead. Residents who are living in Hobart has different taste on how to consumed their coffee, merely 40% of them are buying fresh coffee while 55% of them are spending their money on instant coffee while 63% of hem are staying at a café for tea and coffee in the last 4 weeks.

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