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The chart below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.summarize the information by selecting and reporting on the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. RDEG

The bar chart and graph give information about the number and gender of participants in the Olympics since it is started in 1924 until 2012. Overall, the bar chart indicates the number of male participants soar dramatically between 1924-1952. Then, It goes up slightly until 2012 and totally it is become doubled during these years. A second point the bar chart shows female contribution is practically to zero in the beginning, and it has a slight rise until 1952. Over the next 32 years, female participants rose dramatically. There was a substantial surge during these years. The line Graph on the other hand illustrates an obvious upward trend and experts a gradual rose of both gender in 60 years the beginning. subsequently, it has a considerable rise throughout 88 years. To summarize, by comparison between both sexes in the chart. it is comprehensible, female involvements went up widely over the years, while it occurs gradually for male participants.

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chart
 and graph give information about the number and gender of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participants
 in the Olympics since it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 in 1924 until 2012.

Overall
, the bar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 indicates the number of male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participants
 soar dramatically
 between 1924-1952. Then, It goes up slightly
 until 2012 and totally
 it is become
 doubled during these years. A second point the bar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
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shows
 female contribution is practically
 to zero in the beginning, and it has a slight rise until 1952. Over the next
 32 years, female You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participants
 rose dramatically
. There was a substantial surge during these years.

The line Graph on the other hand
 illustrates an obvious upward trend and experts a gradual rose of both gender in 60 years the beginning. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSubsequently
subsequently
, it has a considerable rise throughout 88 years.

To summarize
, by comparison between both sexes in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is comprehensible, female involvements went up widely
 over the years, while it occurs gradually
 for male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleaguememberplayershareholderpartnerparty
participants
. 