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The chart below shows the proportions of adults in Canada who own one car, two cars, more than two cars, or who do not own a car. v.2

The chart below shows the proportions of adults in Canada who own one car, two cars, more than two cars, or who do not own a car. v. 2
The given pie chart illustrates the percentages of Canadian people who do not own a car or own at least one car. It is noticeable that there are four groups of car owners namely no-car, one-car, two-car, and over-two-car owners. Also, the proportion of one-car owners is the highest while the least is of those who have more than two cars. Look at the chart for more detail, there are just over half of the adults have one automobile in Canada shown in the blue segment in the chart that is the highest percentage in the four groups. The second highest figure shown in green is those who own two cars, accounting for about 25 percent. In addition, the figure for Canadian adults owning no car is slightly lower than that of two-car owners with about a fifth. The group having the smallest proportion of all groups is more-than-two-car owners. The figure for this group is just around 5 percent.
The
given
pie chart illustrates the percentages of Canadian
people
who do not
own
a
car
or
own
at least one car.

It is noticeable that there are four
groups
of
car
owners
namely
no-car, one-car, two-car, and over-two-car
owners
.
Also
, the proportion of one-car
owners
is the highest while the least is of those who have more than two cars.

Look at the chart for more detail, there are
just
over half of the adults have one automobile in Canada shown in the blue segment in the chart
that is
the highest percentage in the four
groups
. The second highest figure shown in green is those who
own
two
cars
, accounting for about 25 percent.

In addition
, the figure for Canadian adults owning no
car
is
slightly
lower than that of two-car
owners
with about a fifth. The
group
having the smallest proportion of all
groups
is more-than-two-car
owners
. The figure for this
group
is
just
around 5 percent.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportions of adults in Canada who own one car, two cars, more than two cars, or who do not own a car. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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