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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart delineates the places which were visited by people living in Canada. For the bifurcation four places are taken into deliberation which were the Cinema, Theatre, Library and Zoo. Taking note of the Cinema, there were significantly lower amount of newly migrant people from other countries which were 50%. On the contrary, there were higher amount of new migrants born in the English-speaking countries and people who were born in Canada visited cinema. Relatively lower amount of people of all three classes visited theatre as compared to other three places. There were 10%, 20% and around 25% of new migrants born in other countries, new migrants born in English-speaking countries and people born in Canada respectively visited theatre. Likewise, considering the Library there were around 55% of new migrants born in other countries who visited it. However, there were almost same amount of English-speaking migrants and those who were born in Canada visited Library. The Zoo was highly visited by new migrants from English speaking countries which were around 50%. All in all, after accurate analysis maximum new migrants from English-speaking countries and people who were born in Canada visited the cinema. On the other hand, new migrants from other countries highly visited the Library.
The chart delineates the places which were
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visited
by
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people
living in Canada.

For the bifurcation four places
are taken
into deliberation which were the
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Cinema
,
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Theatre
, Library and Zoo. Taking note of the
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Cinema
, there were
significantly
lower
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amount
of
newly
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migrant
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people
from
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other
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countries
which were 50%.
On the contrary
, there were higher
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amount
of
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new
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migrants
born in the English-speaking
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countries
and
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people
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who
were born
in Canada
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visited
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cinema
.
Relatively
lower
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amount
of
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people
of all three classes
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visited
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theatre
as compared to
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other
three places. There were 10%, 20% and around 25% of
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new
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migrants
born in
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other
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countries
,
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new
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migrants
born in English-speaking
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countries
and
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people
born in Canada
respectively
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visited
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theatre
.

Likewise
, considering the Library there were around 55% of
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new
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migrants
born in
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other
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countries
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who
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visited
it.
However
, there were almost same
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amount
of English-speaking
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migrants
and those
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who
were born
in Canada
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visited
Library. The Zoo was
highly
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visited
by
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new
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migrants
from
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English speaking
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countries
which were around 50%.

All in all, after accurate analysis maximum
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new
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migrants
from English-speaking
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countries
and
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people
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who
were born
in Canada
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visited
the
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cinema
. On the
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other
hand,
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new
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migrants
from
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other
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countries
highly
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visited
the Library.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.

Academic
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4 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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