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The chart below shows the percentages of internet users by age group in Canada who shopped online in 2014 and 2018.

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The given bar chart demonstrates the proportion of network users by age groups in Canada who shopped on the line from 2014 to 2018. Overall, as can be clearly seen on the bar chart during the whole period the most popular online shoppers were adults and young people as well, however, other elderly people did not buy things frequently. In terms of teenagers and young adults 15-25, shopping on the web exactly was 20%, which was 2014. Follow this, among the 26-35 ages the online shopping climbed to 11%, however, between the adults the ages groups 35 -45 dropped significantly 25 respectively. According to the elderly people 44-55 ages, they purchased the things to around 25 % in 2018, while youth and young adults show only 22 %. Following this, the vast majority of people the ages group 35-45 illustrates the highest percentages of online shopping approximately 37%. I contrast, the people who are 26-35 ages shopped about 32% in 2018.
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group 35-45 illustrates the highest percentages of online shopping approximately 37%. I contrast, the
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shopped about 32% in 2018.
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