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Analysis and explanation in the bar graph about the most favorite movie genre of the people

Analysis and explanation in the bar graph about the most favorite movie genre of the people PWXMp
The bar chart shows and compare the various category of movie, which is the most popular among the five genres. There are 20 participants in the representation of data. Based on the data have shown in graph the most favored genre of the viewers is the romance. Six (6) participants choose romance as their favorite type of movie. The second favorite genre of the respondents is actions, based on the data five (5) respondents says that they like actions than other genre. The third type of movie that people wants are the comedy and Science Fiction as you can see, and based on the graph they have same number of people who choose on the both genre. Both genres got four (4) meaning in both genre 4 people choose comedy and science fiction as their favorite types of movie. The least favorite based on the graph is the drama only one respondent who choose drama as he/she favorite type of movie. Conclusion the most watched and popular movie genre is the Romance. People love to watch movie about love. The least popular is drama, people nowadays are not really interested in drama maybe because the plot is the same with other dramas.
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and compare the various category of
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, which is the most popular among the five genres. There are 20 participants in the representation of data.

Based on the data have shown in graph the most favored
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genre
of the viewers is the romance. Six (6) participants
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romance as their
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of
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. The second
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of the respondents is actions, based on the data five (5) respondents says that they like actions than other
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genre
. The third
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of
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that
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wants are the comedy and Science Fiction as you can
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, and based on the graph they have same number of
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who
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on the both
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. Both genres
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four (4) meaning in both
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4
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comedy and science fiction as their
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types
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. The least
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based on the graph is the
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drama
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one respondent who
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of movie.

Conclusion the most
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and popular
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is the Romance.
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People
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about
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. The least popular is
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,
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