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The diagram below shows the different stages in the lifecycle of a car.

The flow chart shows the way in which the cars are manufactured and repaired. Overall, there are 7 stages in the whole car manufacturing and repairing process, beginning with the collecting up of raw and reuse stuff and ending with the same stage. To begin, the place used to gather the raw and reform materials is collected all these things. These parts are then placed in a factory, where these are fabricated and joined. After this, the build cars are dispatched to the market. Next, these cars are driven on the roads; meanwhile, it is repaired and maintained regularly. At last, cars are started deteriorating and cannot be mend. Afterward, cars are sent to the waste material-gathering place, where it is collected for recycling. At the same place, these materials are disjointed. At the subsequent stage, their steel body parts are flattened and their plastics are retrieved again. Having complete all these steps, the lifecycle will then begin again.

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shows
 the way in which the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
are manufactured
 and repaired.

Overall
, there are 7 stages in the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 manufacturing and repairing process, beginning with the collecting up of raw and reuse stuff and ending with the same stage.

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begin
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used
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 all these things. These parts are then placed in a factory, where these are fabricated
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joined
. After this, the build You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
are dispatched
 to the market. Next
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
are driven
 on the roads; meanwhile, it is repaired
 and maintained regularly
.

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cars
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be mend
. Afterward, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
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sent
 to the waste material-gathering place, where it is collected
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. At the subsequent stage, their steel body parts are flattened
 and their plastics are retrieved
 again. Having complete all these steps, the lifecycle will then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
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