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The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005 compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featu v.2

The bar graph compares the proportion of jobless people (aged between 15 to 24-year-olds) and total unemployment among five European countries (Poland, Italy, Hungary, Germany and Denmark) during 2005. Overall, it is clearly that, youth unemployment rates were higher throughout the given time period. Looking at the proportion of jobless young adults, the highest unemployment rates were observed in Poland 37%. Italy came on second place with 23% unemployment rate among young. The lowest figure was recorded in Denmark (less than 5%). Germany and Hungary had approximately three times higher youth unemployment rates compared to Denmark. With regards to the overall unemployment rates, Poland also had the highest score in this category 15 %. Interestingly, that Germany came next with 10 % in the pool of overall unemployment, while Italy and Hungary had similar levels of overall unemployment, nearly 7-8%. In contrast, Denmark the lowest rates of total workforce approximately 3 %.
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among five European countries (Poland, Italy, Hungary, Germany and Denmark) during 2005.

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among young. The lowest figure
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, Poland
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005 compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries

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