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Maps and city development

The top diagram shows the architecture of current day view of the islip town and the below diagram shows the proposed architecture in the coming future. This report highlights its similarities and differences. School, park, shops and housing are part of current plan and these are included in the proposed plans as well. New housing, Dual Carriageway, bus station and shopping center are some of the notable and newly proposed changes. A Dual Carriage way planned to get constructed all around the town as there a single lane of transport in the city as of now. School area which is located as the south-west of city is little widened compared to current plan as part of development. As per the current plan shop are available at sides of the main road and these are changed, and all the shops are made available at the one of the Road facing north.
The top diagram
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the architecture of
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town and the below diagram
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the proposed architecture in the coming future. This report highlights its similarities and differences.

School, park, shops and housing are part of
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current
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plan
and these
are included
in the proposed
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plans
as well
. New housing, Dual Carriageway, bus station and shopping center are
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some of the
notable and
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changes
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A Dual Carriage way planned to
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constructed all around the town as
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a single lane of transport in the city as of
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. School area which
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as the south-west of city is
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widened compared to
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current
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plan
as part of development. As per the
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current
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shop are available at sides of the main road and these are
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changed
, and all the shops
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available at the one of the Road facing north.
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IELTS academic Maps and city development

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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