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The chart below shows the percentage of people who can drive in 15 minutes or less to various services in on region of the UK. The chart compares people living in urban with people living in rural

The chart below shows the percentage of people who can drive in 15 minutes or less to various services in on region of the UK. The chart compares people living in urban with people living in rural VBWEQ
The chart below demonstrates the proportion of driver in 15 minutes or less to doctor, petrol station, post office, secondary school, primary school and super market in countryside and city of UK. It can be clearly seen that the proportion of people who can drive in under 15 minutes to various services in urban is always higher than in rural. In general, the percentages of driver in 15 minutes or less to post office in both two region of the UK are the highest to 100%. In contrast, driver proportions to secondary school in urban and rural are the lowest to 95% and 70%, respectively. However, the proportions of driver in under 15 minutes to primary school, doctor, petrol station and supermarket in urban see the highest and reach a peak of 100%, which are chosen higher than in rural to 97%, 90%, 90% and 70%, respectively.
The chart below demonstrates the
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of
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in 15 minutes or less to doctor, petrol station, post office, secondary
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, primary
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and super market in countryside and city of UK. It can be
clearly
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that the
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proportion
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who can drive in under 15 minutes to various services in urban is always higher than in rural.
In general
, the percentages of
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driver
in 15 minutes or less to post office in both two region of the UK are the highest to 100%.
In contrast
,
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driver
proportions to secondary
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school
in urban and rural are the lowest to 95% and 70%,
respectively
.
However
, the proportions of
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driver
in under 15 minutes to primary
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school
, doctor, petrol station and supermarket in urban
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see
the highest and reach a peak of 100%, which
are chosen
higher than in rural to 97%, 90%, 90% and 70%,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of people who can drive in 15 minutes or less to various services in on region of the UK. The chart compares people living in urban with people living in rural

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