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the given pie charts describe adolescent 'expenses in two different countries: Japan and Australia, in the course of 2019. Overall, it is clear that teenagers in both countries spend the largest part of their money in video games, food, and clothes, with a big interest in gaming for Japanese and food for Australian ones. Meanwhile the amount of money spent for books was slightly the same in Japan and Australia. In japan, video games came at the top of the list of the spending with 37 %, while food and clothes accounted for 22% and 20% respectively and less money was spent for books with below 10%. In contrast, in Australia, video games and clothes proportions were inversed and adolescents were more interested in food with 37% while video games represented 22% of the expances. In other hand, clothes were the second main interest for Australian teenagers with the quarter of the money. Nevertheles the spending for book is practiquely the same as Japan with less than 10%.

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Japan
 and Australia.

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games
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food
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clothes
 accounted for 22% and 20% respectively
 and less money was spent
 for books with below 10%.

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video
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games
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clothes
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clothes
 were the second main interest for Australian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
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