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The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011. EllQx
The line graph details the proportions of people going to the cinema once or more than once a month in an unspecified European country over the 2000-2011 period. Overall, the rates of moviegoers of all ages generally increased, despite periodic fluctuations. It is also clear that there were always more people aged between 15 and 25 going to the cinema compared to the other age groups, and the 35+ is the only group that had the most consistent growth. In 2000, around 15% of the 15-to-24-year-old people went to the cinema once a month or more, and this figure thereafter enjoyed steady rises, reaching roughly 45% by 2006. During the same 2000-2006 period, similar patterns could be observed with regard to the rates of the 25-to-35 and 35+ groups, with the former increasing from 5% in 2000 to 15% in 2006, and the latter rising from a near zero in 2000 to 5% in 2006. Moviegoers aged between 25 and 35 also rose in numbers, albeit erratically, from 10% in 2000 to 20% in 2006. From 2006 towards the end of the period, the figure for the 15-to-24 age bracket experienced 2 years of ups and downs, before regaining its upward streak, eventually finishing off at 52% in 2008. The percentage of the 7-to-14 and the 25-to-35 groups also fluctuated greatly, before both reaching 30% in 2008. The rate of the 35+, meanwhile, rose gradually throughout the period, ultimately amounting to roughly 14% in 2008.
The line graph
details
the proportions of
people
going to the cinema once or more than once a month in an unspecified European country over the 2000-2011
period
.
Overall
, the rates of moviegoers of all ages
generally
increased, despite periodic fluctuations. It is
also
clear
that there were always more
people
aged between 15 and 25 going to the cinema compared to the other age
groups
, and the 35+ is the
only
group
that had the most consistent growth.

In 2000, around 15% of the 15-to-24-year-
old
people
went to the cinema once a month or more, and this figure thereafter enjoyed steady rises, reaching roughly 45% by 2006. During the same 2000-2006
period
, similar patterns could
be observed
with regard to the rates of the 25-to-35 and 35+
groups
, with the former increasing from 5% in 2000 to 15% in 2006, and the latter rising from a near zero in 2000 to 5% in 2006. Moviegoers aged between 25 and 35
also
rose in numbers, albeit
erratically
, from 10% in 2000 to 20% in 2006.

From 2006 towards the
end
of the
period
, the figure for the 15-to-24 age bracket experienced 2 years of ups and downs,
before
regaining its upward streak,
eventually
finishing off at 52% in 2008. The percentage of the 7-to-14 and the 25-to-35
groups
also
fluctuated
greatly
,
before
both reaching 30% in 2008. The rate of the 35+, meanwhile, rose
gradually
throughout the
period
,
ultimately
amounting to roughly 14% in 2008.
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