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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the presented chart illustrates the percentage of the family which was owned and leased houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. as is observed, there was an inversely proportional fluctuation between those who had a house and those who rented one. In 1918, for about 22%, people owned the accommodation. In contrast, residents who rented houses started with a high percentage, nearly 80%. as 21 years went by, there was a slight increase of the family who bought a house, approximately 30%. in fact, the leasing accommodation was declined to roughly 60%. In 1961, same as the years before, the owned houses were improved, yet the rented ones were dropped. since the family started to own their houses, the percentage of those who paid annually were gradually decreased each year. In 1971, both bars met at the same level, 50%. However, ten years later, house owners led the chart while the house leasing dropped, 60% and 40%, respectively. These trends kept going until the household owner reached the peak at almost 70% before fell to nearly 60% in 2011.
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presented chart illustrates the percentage of the family which was
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owned
and leased
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houses
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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as
is observed
, there was an
inversely
proportional fluctuation between those
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who
had a
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house
and those
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who
rented one. In 1918, for about 22%,
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people
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owned
the accommodation.
In contrast
, residents
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who
rented
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houses
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started
with a high percentage,
nearly
80%.
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as
21 years went by, there was a slight increase of the family
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who
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bought
a
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house
, approximately 30%.
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in
fact, the leasing accommodation
was declined
to roughly 60%. In 1961, same as the years
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before
, the
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owned
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houses
were
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improved
,
yet
the rented ones
were dropped
.
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since
the family
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started
to
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own
their
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houses
, the percentage of those
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who
paid
annually
were
gradually
decreased each
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year
. In 1971, both bars met at the same level, 50%.
However
, ten years later,
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house
owners led the chart while the
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house
leasing dropped, 60% and 40%,
respectively
. These trends
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kept
going until the household owner reached the peak at almost 70%
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before
fell to
nearly
60% in 2011.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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