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hooby by interest leisure primary school students

hooby by interest leisure primary school students w62n

The given line graph illustrates the information about the most popular hobbies among students of primary schools between 1990 and 2020. The data is given in percentage. Overall, three lines intersected approximately in 1994. Also, the line that represents playing online games had experienced an upward trend, whereas the other two lines had kept fluctuating. The popularity of three leisure activities was almost the same in 1994. The percentage of all of them was approximately 35 per cent. However, after that, the line for playing online games increased significantly, whereas the other two lines declined gradually. The popularity of online games kept rising and peaked at approximately 95 per cent, while the popularity of reading and painting kept fluctuating from 1995 to 2020. Before the fluctuation, the percentage of both activities decreased slightly till 1995. Consequently, even though reading was the most common hobby in 1990, it became the least popular hobby in 2020 among primary school students.

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line
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lines
 intersected approximately in 1994. Also
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 that represents playing online games had experienced an upward trend, whereas the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
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kept
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The popularity of three leisure activities was almost the same in 1994. The percentage of all of them was approximately 35 per cent. However
, after that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
 for playing online games increased significantly
, whereas the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
lines
 declined gradually
.

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kept
 rising and peaked at approximately 95 per cent, while the popularity of reading and painting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 fluctuating from 1995 to 2020. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 the fluctuation, the percentage of both activities decreased slightly
 till 1995. Consequently
, even though
 reading was the most common hobby in 1990, it became the least popular hobby in 2020 among primary school students. 