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the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1978 and 2011

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The provided bar chart illustrates the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918-2011. Most noticeably of all, it can be seen that during this period, owned accommodation considerably grew until it reached the peak at 69% in 2001. By contrast rented accommodation progressively decreased, with a minimum in the same year of the maximum reached by owned accommodation. A trend that can be observed is that in 1971 the percentage of owned and rented accommodation meet with the same percentage of 50%. Another interesting trend happened from 1939 to 1953, where both owned and rented accommodation kept constant value at 31%. It also worth noting that from 2001 to 2011 there was an inversion of trend; infact owned accommodation broken the general increasing with a slightly decrease of 3-5%, a contrast trend can be observed for rental accommodation. Overall, the bar chart illustrates a bipartite market with a specular trend for the 2 actors where a peak of one correspond to minimum of the other and an increasing for owned accommodation implicate a decreasing for rented accommodation.
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in England and Wales from 1918-2011.

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of all, it can be
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that during this period,
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owned
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accommodation
considerably
grew until it reached the peak at 69% in 2001. By contrast rented
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progressively
decreased, with a minimum in the same year of the maximum reached by
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accommodation.

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that can
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is that in 1971 the percentage of
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owned
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meet
with the same percentage of 50%. Another interesting
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happened from 1939 to 1953, where both
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owned
and rented
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accommodation
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kept
constant value at 31%.

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broken the general increasing with a
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of 3-5%, a contrast
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can
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for rental accommodation.

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, the bar chart illustrates a bipartite market with a specular
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for the 2 actors where a peak of one correspond to minimum of the other and an increasing for
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implicate a decreasing for rented
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