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The two maps show changes to the Colwick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. We can see that the Arts Centre made many changes during this period, including new buildings and green space.

The two maps show changes to the Colwick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. We can see that the Arts Centre made many changes during this period, including new buildings and green space. XJ7q
The two maps show changes to the Colwick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. We can see that the Arts Centre made many changes during this period, including new buildings and green space. In the past, the meeting room was between snack bar and toilet. It was relocated in the top left-hand corner of the Centre, and in addition, a new meeting room was built next to it. The two Galleries were merged into one and were moved to the far left of the Centre. The old toilet was demolished; however, in its place the Centre created a new Café. The concert hall and cinema were in one building in the middle of the Centre, they separated them and constructed two buildings next to each other in the top right-hand corner of the Centre and the concert hall increased in size. Also, a Drama Studio was built opposite the cinema. What is more, A Central Exhibition Area erected in the middle of the Centre. In 2005 there was a wasteland in the bottom of Centre, whereas now a stage, an outdoor exhibition and performance area are there, and in addition, they planted lots of new trees and built seating areas in this place. So, it is clear that the Arts Centre changed and expanded during this period.
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made
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many
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changes
during this period, including
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new
buildings and green space.

In the past, the meeting room was between snack bar and toilet. It
was relocated
in the top
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left
-hand corner of the
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, and
in addition
, a
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meeting room
was built
next
to it.

The two Galleries
were merged
into one and were
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moved
to the far
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left
of the
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Centre
. The
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toilet
was demolished
;
however
, in its place the
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created a
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Café.

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The
concert hall and cinema were in one building in the middle of the
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Centre
, they separated them and constructed two buildings
next
to each other in the top right-hand corner of the
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Centre
and the concert hall increased in size.
Also
, a Drama Studio
was built
opposite the cinema.

What is more
, A Central Exhibition Area erected in the middle of the
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Centre
. In 2005 there was a wasteland in the bottom of
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Centre
, whereas
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now
a stage, an outdoor exhibition and performance area are there, and
in addition
, they planted lots of
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new
trees and built seating areas in this place.

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, it is
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clear
that the Arts
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Centre
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changed
and expanded during this period.
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IELTS academic The two maps show changes to the Colwick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. We can see that the Arts Centre made many changes during this period, including new buildings and green space.

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