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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 16Aq
The table presents the percentages of national consumer expenditure by food/drink/tobacco, clothing/wear, leisure/education in a number of countries in Europe, which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002. Overall, the category of food/drink/tobacco was the highest expenditure by Turkey, followed by Ireland. However, Spain was less expensive than other countries on leisure/education. First of all, Turkey had the highest percentages of food/drink/ tobacco around 32 percent. Moreover, Ireland took second place for food/drink/tobacco approximately 29 percent. However, for the category clothing/footwear Italy had expenditure about 9 percent, although for each country they had different numbers around 0, 10 percent. Turkey spent the most number in all items in this percentage. On the other hand, Spain had the lowest expenditure nearly 2 percent in the leisure/education category. However, for each country, they had contrast numbers of percentage approximately 1 percent. The least displaced by Turkey for the highest number in leisure/education.
The table presents the percentages of national consumer
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by food/drink/tobacco, clothing/wear, leisure/education in a
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in Europe, which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
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by Turkey, followed by Ireland.
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on leisure/education.

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about 9
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around 0, 10
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. Turkey spent the most
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in all items in this percentage.

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in the leisure/education category.
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of percentage approximately 1
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in leisure/education.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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