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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The given bar chart illustrates the houses owned and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011 in England and Wales.  At the first glance, it is clear that the number of owned households increased considerably over the years, meanwhile the percentage of rented households declined gradually. Rented and owned house percentage is exactly the same in 1917. Apparently, the number of owned households reached the peak in 1991, when almost 70% of households were owned. Whereas, in 1918, the percentage of owned households was just over 20%, which is the bottomest point. While in 1918, the percentage of rented accommodation rocketed the highest point. The rented houses in 2001 reached the bottom by nearly 30%, but it is a little bit more than the lowest point of owned accommodation which means the rented accommodation is a more popular choice for hosholders in England and Wales. In comparison between 1918 and 2001 there is a significant difference between the percentage of rented and owned accommodation. Furthermore, almost 40% less rented accommodation have been rented and almost 50% more owned accommodation has been bought.
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bar chart illustrates the
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houses
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owned
and rented
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accommodation
from 1918 to 2011 in England and Wales.  At the
first
glance, it is
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clear
that the number of
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owned
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households
increased
considerably
over the years, meanwhile the
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percentage
of rented
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households
declined
gradually
. Rented and
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owned
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house
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percentage
is exactly the same in 1917.
Apparently
, the number of
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owned
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households
reached the peak in 1991, when almost 70% of
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households
were
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owned
. Whereas, in 1918, the
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percentage
of
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owned
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households
was
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just
over 20%, which is the bottomest point. While in 1918, the
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percentage
of rented
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accommodation
rocketed the highest point. The rented
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houses
in 2001 reached the bottom by
nearly
30%,
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but
it is a
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little
bit more than the lowest point of
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owned
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accommodation
which means the rented
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accommodation
is a more popular choice for hosholders in England and Wales.
In comparison
between 1918 and 2001 there is a significant difference between the
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percentage
of rented and
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owned
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accommodation
.
Furthermore
, almost 40% less rented
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accommodation
have
been rented
and almost 50% more
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owned
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accommodation
has been
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bought
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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