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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. 1QNM
The chart reveals the trends in the number of owned houses and rented accommodations. The data is for England and Wales during the year 1918 and 2011. As an overall understanding, at the beginning of the century, a high percentage of families were lodged in self-owned spaces. However, by the end of the period, the trend flipped and saw more households living in leased-out residences. The graph also indicates that the year 1971 was a pivotal point in this changing trend. The year 1918 had the highest number of private residences, at around 78%. Gradually, this number fell to 59% by the year 1961. Interestingly, in 1971 the number of hired and owned dwellings were at 50%, each. The year 2001 saw the lowest figure in owned houses, however, by 2011, it jumped back to 36%. Contrastingly, in 1918, families occupying leased out residences were only 22%. In 1939 and 1953, the data did not see any change and was glued at 32%. By 1981, approximately 60% of the population was living as tenants. In 2001, rentend households reached their peak at around 69%. However, in 2011 there was a sudden break in the trend and recorded a dip in the statistics; closing at 64%.
The chart reveals the trends in the
number
of
owned
houses
and rented accommodations. The data is for England and Wales during the
year
1918 and 2011.

As an
overall
understanding, at the beginning of the century, a high percentage of families
were lodged
in self-
owned
spaces.
However
, by the
end
of the period, the trend flipped and
saw
more households living in leased-out residences. The graph
also
indicates that the
year
1971 was a pivotal point in this changing trend.

The
year
1918 had the highest
number
of private residences, at around 78%.
Gradually
, this
number
fell to 59% by the
year
1961.
Interestingly
, in 1971 the
number
of hired and
owned
dwellings were at 50%, each. The
year
2001
saw
the lowest figure in
owned
houses
,
however
, by 2011, it jumped back to 36%.

Contrastingly
, in 1918, families occupying leased out residences were
only
22%. In 1939 and 1953, the data did not
see
any
change
and
was glued
at 32%. By 1981, approximately 60% of the population was living as tenants. In 2001,
rentend
households reached their peak at around 69%.
However
, in 2011 there was a sudden break in the trend and recorded a dip in the statistics; closing at 64%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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