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The graph below shows the different home activities among young children in four different countries

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The column graph gives information about young children's indoor activities in four different countries (Malaysia, China, Nigeria, Sudan). As can be seen from the diagram, computer games experienced a large proportion of young children, whereas reading activity witnessed the lowest percentage of children in four countries. To begin with, computer games are quite popular among children (from 40% to 60%) in these countries. Interestingly, the proportion of watching TV is the same figure for 30% in four nations. However, board games are picked up by almost a quarter of children in Malaysian and China, while it is the most well-known in Sudan with 30%. Finally, reading activity is not as common as other indoor activities, and the highest ratio of readers in Malaysia 20%. Only 10% of Nigerian and Sudanese children read books, while 15% of Chinese girls and boys interested in the reading activity.

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