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The bar chart depicts the data about the quantity of houses entroducted each year in Derby and Notthingam.

The bar chart depicts the data about the quantity of houses entroducted each year in Derby and Notthingam. DGQE
The bar chart depicts the data about the quantity of houses entroducted each year. In General, it can be seen that both Derby and Nottingham cities of building erected during 2000 to 2009 years. It is clear that the number of houses of both cities similar constructed in 2000 year around fiftiy houses, which was followed by not change in Derby on built the houses. In contrast, the Nottingham place eracted the houses a minimal increase in 2001. However, in 2002 witnessed a sharp decline on the building of city about 20 houses, when in that year the Derby city could boast of the number of houses. The next five years construction of houses unchanged at 50 houses in Derby. But during 2005 to 2009 registered a fluctuation of erection in Nottingham city. In 2009, Derby city became leadership on the construction of city houses.
The bar chart depicts the data about the quantity of
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entroducted
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In General
, it can be
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seen
that both Derby and Nottingham
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of building erected during 2000 to 2009 years. It is
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that the number of
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of both
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similar constructed in 2000
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around
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fiftiy
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, which
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by not
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in Derby on built the
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, the Nottingham place
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eracted
the
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a minimal increase in 2001.
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, in 2002 witnessed a sharp decline on the building of city about 20
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houses
, when in that
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year
the Derby city could boast of the number of
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. The
next
five years construction of
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unchanged at 50
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in Derby.
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But
during 2005 to 2009 registered a fluctuation of erection in Nottingham city. In 2009, Derby city became leadership on the construction of city
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IELTS academic The bar chart depicts the data about the quantity of houses entroducted each year in Derby and Notthingam.

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