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The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. NQ1N
The diagram shows that the process of manufacturing matches has several stages. The matchsticks are first cut, prepared, dried and moved to a storage area. After that, they are dipped into several chemicals and dried before being packaged. In the first phase, a log of wood is placed in a peeler and rotated, while a flat blade peels a long, thin sheet of wood, called veneer, from the outer surface of the log. The veneer proceeds to the chopper, which cuts it into small sticks. These are then soaked in a vat of ammonium phosphate. Afterwards, they are placed in a large, rotating drum. From there, the matches are dumped into a hopper and blown through a metal duct to the storage area. In the next stage, the sticks are moved from the storage area and they fall into a funnel-shaped device which lines them up to be inserted into holes on a long, continuous, perforated steel belt. As the belt moves along, the tips of the matches are dipped in a series of three tanks holding firstly paraffin wax, then base chemicals and finally tip chemicals. Next, the belt loops up and down through a drying area. In the final step of the process, the matches are packaged.
The diagram
shows
that the process of manufacturing
matches
has several stages. The matchsticks

are
first
cut
, prepared, dried and
moved
to a storage area. After that, they
are dipped
into several

chemicals and dried
before
being packaged
.

In the
first
phase, a log of wood
is placed
in a peeler and rotated, while a flat blade peels a long, thin

sheet of wood, called veneer, from the outer surface of the log. The veneer proceeds to the chopper,

which
cuts
it into
small
sticks. These are then soaked in a vat of ammonium phosphate. Afterwards,

they
are placed
in a large, rotating drum. From there, the
matches
are dumped
into a hopper and

blown through a metal duct to the storage area.

In the
next
stage, the sticks are
moved
from the storage
area and
they fall into a funnel-shaped

device which lines them up to
be inserted
into holes on a long, continuous, perforated steel belt.

As the belt
moves
along, the tips of the
matches
are dipped
in a series of three tanks holding
firstly


paraffin wax, then base chemicals and
finally
tip chemicals.
Next
, the belt loops up and down through

a drying area. In the final step of the process, the
matches
are packaged
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.

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6.0
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