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The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years. 7k3n

The given bar graph illustrates the changes in the percentage of adults’ education level in 1961, 1991, and 2001. Overall, it can clearly be seen that the percentage for all categories experienced a gradual increase with the exception of the figure for trades, which remained relatively steady throughout the given period. Furthermore, the number of graduates from high school remained the highest, whereas the figure for college and university which started at the lowest increased and surpassed those of trades. In terms of the two highest figures in the beginning, high school stood at a much higher level than trades at precisely 23 and 11 in 1961, respectively. The figure for the former increased significantly to almost 30 in 2001 whereas the one for the latter leveled off until the end of the period. Regarding the other two figures, both of which experienced a similar pattern. The figure for college in 1961 and 1991 stood at 9 and 12, respectively, which is merely one point lower than that of university. Thereafter, both figures ended up at the same level, which is 18 in 2001.

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