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The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. the graph shows the number of males eaten in fast food restaurants and sit down Restraunts.

The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. the graph shows the number of males eaten in fast food restaurants and sit down Restraunts. ANrw
The illustrated pie charts demonstrate the proportion of money utilised by the middle class family on restaurants meals, whereas line graph elucidates the number of meals consumed in junk food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Overall, it is notice that money spent on the restaurants and Hotel meals gradually increased over the period. Also, proportion of human beings increased rapidly who inhale food in Fast Food shops as compared to sit-down eating houses in the given time interval. It is vividly clear, that, in a year in 1970, masses usually pondered to consume homemade food that was 90%, whereas only 10% restaurant food was eaten over the year. 35% of readymade food was devoured by citizen, in year 1990. Moreover, after 10 years percentage of food eaten in shops rosed up and comes to 50% in Year 2000. Moving further, in year 1970, 20 meals were inhaled by individuals in both fast food and sit-down hotels. While, selling of food in sit-down restaurants were dramatically rised and 40 meals were eaten in year, whereas only 30 miles were consumed in junk food shops, in year 1980. However, in year 1990, the production of fast food inclined in Fast Food hotels and 55 miles was sold in year. Whereas, 45 meals were consumed by person in sit-down down restaurants.
The illustrated pie charts demonstrate the proportion of money
utilised
by the middle
class
family on
restaurants
meals
, whereas line graph elucidates the number of
meals
consumed in junk
food
restaurants
and
sit-down
restaurants
.
Overall
, it is notice that money spent on the
restaurants
and Hotel
meals
gradually
increased over the period.
Also
, proportion of human beings increased
rapidly
who inhale
food
in
Fast
Food
shops as compared to
sit-down
eating
houses
in the
given
time interval. It is
vividly
clear
, that, in a
year
in 1970, masses
usually
pondered to consume homemade
food
that was 90%, whereas
only
10%
restaurant
food
was eaten
over the
year
. 35% of
readymade
food
was devoured
by citizen, in
year
1990.
Moreover
, after 10 years percentage of
food
eaten in shops
rosed
up and
comes
to 50% in
Year
2000. Moving
further
, in
year
1970, 20
meals
were inhaled
by individuals in both
fast
food
and
sit-down
hotels. While, selling of
food
in
sit-down
restaurants
were
dramatically
rised
and 40
meals
were eaten
in
year
, whereas
only
30 miles
were consumed
in junk
food
shops, in
year
1980.
However
, in
year
1990, the production of
fast
food
inclined in
Fast
Food
hotels and
55 miles
was sold
in
year
.
Whereas
, 45
meals
were consumed
by person in
sit-down
down
restaurants
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. the graph shows the number of males eaten in fast food restaurants and sit down Restraunts.

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