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The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. the graph shows the number of males eaten in fast food restaurants and sit down Restraunts.

The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. the graph shows the number of males eaten in fast food restaurants and sit down Restraunts. ANrw
The illustrated pie charts demonstrate the proportion of money utilised by the middle class family on restaurants meals, whereas line graph elucidates the number of meals consumed in junk food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Overall, it is notice that money spent on the restaurants and Hotel meals gradually increased over the period. Also, proportion of human beings increased rapidly who inhale food in Fast Food shops as compared to sit-down eating houses in the given time interval. It is vividly clear, that, in a year in 1970, masses usually pondered to consume homemade food that was 90%, whereas only 10% restaurant food was eaten over the year. 35% of readymade food was devoured by citizen, in year 1990. Moreover, after 10 years percentage of food eaten in shops rosed up and comes to 50% in Year 2000. Moving further, in year 1970, 20 meals were inhaled by individuals in both fast food and sit-down hotels. While, selling of food in sit-down restaurants were dramatically rised and 40 meals were eaten in year, whereas only 30 miles were consumed in junk food shops, in year 1980. However, in year 1990, the production of fast food inclined in Fast Food hotels and 55 miles was sold in year. Whereas, 45 meals were consumed by person in sit-down down restaurants.
The illustrated pie charts demonstrate the proportion of money
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class
family on
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restaurants
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meals
, whereas line graph elucidates the number of
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meals
consumed in junk
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food
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restaurants
and
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sit-down
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restaurants
.
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, it is notice that money spent on the
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restaurants
and Hotel
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meals
gradually
increased over the period.
Also
, proportion of human beings increased
rapidly
who inhale
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food
in
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Fast
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Food
shops as compared to
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sit-down
eating
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houses
in the
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given
time interval. It is
vividly
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clear
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year
in 1970, masses
usually
pondered to consume homemade
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food
that was 90%, whereas
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only
10%
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restaurant
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food
was eaten
over the
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year
. 35% of
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readymade
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food
was devoured
by citizen, in
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year
1990.
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, after 10 years percentage of
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food
eaten in shops
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rosed
up and
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comes
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Year
2000. Moving
further
, in
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year
1970, 20
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meals
were inhaled
by individuals in both
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fast
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food
and
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sit-down
hotels. While, selling of
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food
in
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sit-down
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restaurants
were
dramatically
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year
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in junk
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food
shops, in
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year
1980.
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, in
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year
1990, the production of
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fast
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food
inclined in
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Fast
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Food
hotels and
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55 miles
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in
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year
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, 45
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meals
were consumed
by person in
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sit-down
down
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restaurants
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. the graph shows the number of males eaten in fast food restaurants and sit down Restraunts.

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