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ask 1: The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050

The bar chart represents the global population. The data indicates the total population of four nations India, China, USA and Japan. It also shows the projection for 2050 of all four countries. In 1950 China was the most populated place which registers the figure around 24% whereas the least number of citizen were in Japan that is 4%. Later on in 2002 there was a 4% fall in the ratio of natives living in China but still it was the highest amongst all four kingdoms. India was the second largest occupied nation accounted for 19% of world population. In contrast, 5% of people were from USA which is 3% more than Japan. In 2050, India is predicted to increase their humankind by 20% which is the excessive of all while the portion of China and Japan are forcasted to decrease to 15% and 2% respectively. Meanwhile the ratio of natives in USA will remain constant in 2050 that is 2% as it was in 2002. Economist have speculate that there will be no change in the number of individuals residing in USA.
The bar chart represents the global population. The data indicates the total population of four nations India, China, USA and Japan. It
also
shows
the projection for 2050 of all four countries.

In 1950 China was the most populated place which registers the figure around 24% whereas the least number of citizen were in Japan
that is
4%.

Later on in 2002 there was a 4% fall in the ratio of natives living in China
but
still
it was the highest amongst all four kingdoms. India was the second largest occupied nation accounted for 19% of world population.
In contrast
, 5% of
people
were
from USA
which is 3% more than Japan.

In 2050, India
is predicted
to increase their humankind by 20% which is the
excessive
of all while the portion of China and Japan are
forcasted
to decrease to 15% and 2%
respectively
.
Meanwhile
the ratio of natives
in USA
will remain constant in 2050
that is
2% as it was in 2002. Economist have
speculate
that there will be no
change
in the number of individuals residing
in USA
.
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IELTS academic ask 1: The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050

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